My beloved 1-3! YOU have done a great job! Now nominate your favourite piece of work from your friends who have done a great description of ah Soh and tell us why.
I personally love Celeste and Alan's work, as well as Shanice and Xiaohui's work. They did a very good description of Ah Soh and I can imagine the character inside my head.
Dear 1-3, I have enjoyed reading all your posts! All of them are really good, I'm so proud of you. I have a hard time choosing and TATA! These are my favourites: Ying Kai & Hong Liang, Le Yuan & Shinyun, Luther & Sam, Jiahao & Zong Hong, Shanice & Xiaohui, Kurniawan & Weiquan, Alan & Celeste
I like Yosika and Vanessa's work as they have a great ideas and vocabulary which impressed me and they have use good phrases like: 1. wrinkled face with a leatery complexion and others. I think that they can get A* for their compositions if they continue this hardwork. Congrats to you. i would surly use the phrases from vanessa AND YOSIKA'S WORK. From: KHoo Sim Hwee (1/3) Register: 5 If there is any things that i had type wrong or grammaatical error please don't mind. School: Jurong Secondary School Form Teacher: Ms Zhang
Ms Zhang is an ordinary teacher who teaches a bunch of kind, cute and creative students in JSS. She hopes to teach her students to be more imaginative and to see the beauty of writing stories that can move people.
I like ying kai's work i think it is great as it have alot of adjectives.
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ReplyDeletei like Aiman's and wei jian work.it describes ah soh well and i can imagine how ah soh will look like.
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Personally, I feel that LeYuan and ShinYun's answers are the best. It is because they have used good phrases and their grammar is also correct.
ReplyDeleteI also feel that Shanice and XiaoHui's work is very well done.
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I lik Rachel's work is the best as it has a lot of adjectives and a good description of Ah Soh's feelings,look,what she wears and how she walks.
ReplyDeletePersonally I think that everyone is very good at describe Ah Soh but I think Sam's ,Qiu Feng's and Zong Hong's Work is the best.
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ReplyDeleteI personally love Celeste and Alan's work, as well as Shanice and Xiaohui's work. They did a very good description of Ah Soh and I can imagine the character inside my head.
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all of the post is great espically those with a lot of adjectives like Sam and Luther work
ReplyDeleteI like alan and celeste's work as their work has a lot of description and it contains a lot of adjectives. -min young
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ReplyDeleteI like Celeste,Le Yuan and Shanice's work as they use a lot of good words and phrases and adjectives.
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Dear 1-3, I have enjoyed reading all your posts! All of them are really good, I'm so proud of you. I have a hard time choosing and TATA! These are my favourites: Ying Kai & Hong Liang, Le Yuan & Shinyun, Luther & Sam, Jiahao & Zong Hong, Shanice & Xiaohui, Kurniawan & Weiquan, Alan & Celeste
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I like Yosika and Vanessa's work as they have a great ideas and vocabulary which impressed me and they have use good phrases like:
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I think that they can get A* for their compositions if they continue this hardwork. Congrats to you.
i would surly use the phrases from vanessa AND YOSIKA'S WORK.
From: KHoo Sim Hwee (1/3)
Register: 5
If there is any things that i had type wrong or grammaatical error please don't mind.
School: Jurong Secondary School
Form Teacher: Ms Zhang
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ReplyDeleteI like Celeste and Alan's work, as they describe Ah Soh very well.
ReplyDeleteI like Xiao Hui's and shanice work as their answer are very realistic.
ReplyDeleteI like Wai Lun & gokul work because it is so interseting and has lots of pharses
ReplyDeleteI like Min Young & Min Hao's work as there are good phrases to describe Ah Soh.
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I like Shanice and Xiao hui 's work as their description of Ah Soh is good.
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I like LeYuan and Shinyin work because their work as they have very good discribtion
ReplyDeleteI like Zhong Hong's work because it was done to perfection and yet simple to understand.
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ReplyDeletei perfer ying kai work
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